Thursday 29 October 2015

Messages of Support for the All Blacks

Today in Literacy we wrote messages of support for the Rugby World Cup final against the Wallabies. We discussed the intended audience (the All Blacks, coaches and support staff), the message we wanted to get across and how to incorporate the writing technique of "Personal Voice."
Here are our messages of support:

Good luck All Blacks!
You can do it! We believe in you! Have fun, enjoy the time out there because you won’t have that experience for another 4 years. Even if you don’t win, You still got in the final and NZ will still be proud. You are a really good team now all you need to do is show it!
We will be watching on Sunday at 5am,  since it’s that early you need to win!
Shanelle and Michaela


To all of the All Blacks,
We hope you have a great game against Australia in the World Cup final. You’ve made it this far so you can waste the Ozzys in the final. We hope you six All Blacks have a great life after leaving the team. We think the score is going to be 28/9 to the ABs. Go the All Blacks!
Kind regards, Ethan and Ari.


To The Mighty All Blacks:
I have been watching some of the games but i really liked the game against France, the score blew me away. Richie Mccaw you are a good leader may you have a great last game. I wish all the luck to you guys and hope you win just like 4 years ago. I will be getting up in 5 in the morning to watch you guys win, i really enjoy watching rugby and seeing all you big tough guys getting nailed it makes me laugh. My favourite all black is Julian Savea he plays very well. The All Blacks are the best team in the world! and i mean it!
But If you can’t do it just keep on keep on keep on trying.
MAY THE ALL BLACKS SMASH THOSE AUSSIES.


We hope that you play like you did against France and smash the wallabies. Make New Zealand proud and win the world cup for your supporters. Make us proud.


Go the All Blacks hope you win the 2015 Rugby World Cup Final. We will be cheering for the team to win. Thrash those Wallabies. You can do it because you are the best team ever.
From Will and Daniel.

Dear all Blacks
I hope you win the world cup finals and beat the wallabies. Bring victory home to New zealand with some thrashed wallabies.
From Jack and kaino


Lay down and rest
There is no need to stress
For the country's behind you
Even me two
We've got your back we've got you side
Good luck All Blacks
And win with Pride
-Emily


Dear All Blacks
Hello there team i wish you guys all my luck for the 2015 world cup final. Give it your best shot and waste the Wallabies we got to win this world cup final. Play hard and try hard!
“Hello Team” congratulations on getting into the final game of the 2015 Rugby World Cup. I wish guys you all the luck on your next continuing game Win the Rugby World Cup like you did 4 years ago. Give the Wallabies a wiping and show them how New Zealand plays give it 100%.
I am really excited for you to play heres some advice don’t kick the ball at the wrong time. I wish you all the luck Richie , Dan cater and all those players that are leaving the team, I wish you all the best luck.


Dear the All Blacks

To the All Blacks I hope you do really well in the rugby world cup, get your head in the game and beat Australia. I wish you good luck and I hope you can hear my dad yelling TRY through the tv. If you guys win I will be dancing all day and I would never forget the moment you win.
From Izzy


To The All Blacks,
We hope you have a great game against Lostralia. Remember to play your best and even if you don’t win, keep moving forward. You have set a great example for New Zealand we are proud of your accomplishments, win or lose. For you All Blacks with your last game. Enjoy it.
From Isabelle & Eliala


Go All Blacks!!
You will make our nation proud even if you don’t succeed, but we believe you can do it because you are a great team. Don’t look back because you are rising higher. If you are playing your last game make it the best game you can.

From Abbie and Briana

Tuesday 27 October 2015

Sun Safety And UV Radiation - Riley

Over the last two weeks the class have been looking at how we can get ready for spring/summer and take increasing responsibility for our own Health and Well-Being. We have learnt about UV Radiation and the importance of knowing how to keep ourselves safe from the harmful effects of it. Here is Riley's informative and creative infographic:
Sun Safety And UV Radiation


Tuesday 20 October 2015

Emily's Comma Learning



I had a writing goal at the start of last term that was I can use basic punctuation that is mostly correct ( A  .  ,  ?  !  ‘  “ ) Over the term I worked on that goal and I knew how to do all of them except one, commas. So I decided to find out about commas and make my own presentation on my learning. I now know what a comma is, what it can be used for and why we have commas. Enjoy :)